Critiques wanted.....

Here is a sneak peek into a big project I've been working on.... If you have any suggestions on improvements for the piece, let me know!

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2 comments:

shawnajctenney.blogspot.com said...

I love the atmosphere and mood! I think it's a little left side weighted. Maybe add something to the right side like another tree- it doesn't have to be big. Also give the camels a more distinct silhouette. The lighting is great! Looking good.

Anthony VanArsdale said...

I think it looks awesome! a little something to the right wouldn't be bad, to keep your eye in the picture - unless your eye is to read toward something to the left like a text block. Very pretty.